Lsat on chapter 245/245 on RR (still being written, patreon has more) I'm going with one star for the dnf and wish it hadn't bogged down so thoroughly. If so, that was the wrong "fix" for this problem. Which may be the reason Garthbudy keeps switching PoVs. That started off slightly interesting, but it's just taking to dang long without any interesting action. Because that's ever interesting?!?Īnd it isn't helping that Jake has squirrelled himself off in a cave learning to craft poisons. I finally had it when a completely new character showed up only for us to get the PoV of a complete psychopath. can't help himself with including all these other idiots as PoV characters. oh, fine, for whatever it's worth, this feels like a guy. These LitRPG author names crack me up) can't help him her. Nice power-fantasy nerdery there.īut Zogarth (heh. He's coming into his own and I liked him telling his coworkers "hey, it's a tutorial! Hiding out and trying to stay safe seems like a bad idea for whatever is going to follow." So he gets busy learning and trying things and gaining skills and levels. Jake is kind of fine as a nerd powering up during a System Integration (our world entering a LitRPG state and everyone learning how to level and stuff). Okay, also in the usual way, but what tripped the final wire was yet another PoV shift to people I cared nothing about.
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